Phillip the artist needed some new inspiration for an art
piece. He walked down the street and say a toy store, nail saloon, vegetarian restaurants.
None of it inspired him. His stomach started to rumble in a vicious way. Then
he saw a McDonalds, he decided to go in and order a cheeseburger. He was going to bite into the cheeseburger,
but then divine inspiration struck. I’m going to make a sculpture of a
cheeseburger, he thought to himself. He went home, forgot to pay, and got
arrested. Paid the fine. Then sculpted a magnificent work of art.
9 comments:
I really like the story how he wanted inspiration and he got his from his lunch and got arrested,you describe very well.
I really like your story its nice.Because is funny.
I like the way you described this because it makes it more interesting....for example, "His stomach started to rumble in a vicious way."
I like your story because it's funny and because I like the description. To improve your story you could make your sentences longer.
I like the way you described it. very interesting.
You story is good because is funny :)
Liked the story but you only wrote 98 words.
I really like how a lot of things happen in your story and how you described things.
I liked how you were really casual on how he got arrested it made me giggle.
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