I went to my friend house Nicha and Nina, at night time asked me if you want to do some challenging game? I said sure. Then they just let me sat down on the chair and close my eyes with something, but first they let me tried something so tasty. But after that they put some tea powder in my mouth, I about so vomit because it so disgusting. Again they put some chillies in my mouth. The next day I just couldn't eat something so I drunk only water for the whole day, because it was burning my tongue.
8 comments:
At night "they" asked me.I just forgot to write they.
Is this story real? If it is it was really funny because that is a really weird challenge. You might forgotten some words out but next time if you write something you should check it again.
Its very good but remember to no forget some word
The story was real but the last sentence wasn´t real, and yes it was a really weird game/challenge.
HAHA! Thanks Robert!
This sounds like a fun challenge, but I think you forgot to add a participle phrase.
I like how you added a rhetorical question it makes us want to find out the answer.
you missed out some words but that's OK. Next time check your writing keep going your doing grate.
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