Dear Andrew Sesay.
I thank you for sacrificing all your time to save the baddies and mother's lives. What inspired you to do this, Was it a incident that you had experienced? How many pregnant females have you help with childbirth? Have you ever delivered any triplets? Have you ever had a patient that died during childbirth? What would you do if you didn't do this job? Have you ever delivered stillborn babies? Have you delivered more girls than boys? Do hospitals ever higher you for any jobs that the hospitals can't do? Have you ever done a c section?
6 comments:
You spell 'babies' wrong. :)
You've also spell 'hire' wrong. :)
Your questions are pretty good questions but next time proofread.
I really enjoyed reading your post it is full of descriptive writing.XD
Thank you chris!
Thank you for this piece! I can tell that you are really interested in the Andrew's experience and love the range and the thought behind choosing your questions.
Try to remember to sign your name off so then the person who you are delivering your address to knows who you are. Also, make paragraphs to help the reader follow your work easier.
Great attempt Theo.
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