On the morning of her expedition, Suzan was so excited she was fidgeting. Suzan was hoping to find the one ore, its bright yellow called caramel, which nobody has discovered since 1801, it would be remarkable if she found it. However, as her mum was stepping out the door gingerly there in front of the door was a note to say they’ve found the ore. Suzan was disappointed.
Thursday, 27 October 2016
100 word challenge!
A few months ago, in a village named High End, Suzan, a very energetic girl, was about to go on her first mining expedition with the leader of high end, chief pick.
On the morning of her expedition, Suzan was so excited she was fidgeting. Suzan was hoping to find the one ore, its bright yellow called caramel, which nobody has discovered since 1801, it would be remarkable if she found it. However, as her mum was stepping out the door gingerly there in front of the door was a note to say they’ve found the ore. Suzan was disappointed.
On the morning of her expedition, Suzan was so excited she was fidgeting. Suzan was hoping to find the one ore, its bright yellow called caramel, which nobody has discovered since 1801, it would be remarkable if she found it. However, as her mum was stepping out the door gingerly there in front of the door was a note to say they’ve found the ore. Suzan was disappointed.
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2 comments:
Almost a brilliant first effort at this challenge. Do you know which word you forgot to include?
good choice of story
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