One day there was a girl call Boo she want to make a book that is all cover in yellow every one on her family know that what is her dream. So one day her mom go to the shop and buy a yellow paper for her so when she get back from the school she start writing it but it take her long time because she write gingerly however one day she discovered that what her writing is too boring so she think if she gone a write about discovering of dinosaur and now she is finish and she sent it to the office and now she is famous and remarkable.
1 comment:
Well done for including all 5 words in this challenge. If you read it again does it need any more full stops to separate out your ideas?
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