Thursday, 3 November 2016

100 word challenge- the big fire

A few years ago, there was a humongous fire parents lost their children, families lost their homes but one girl survived. Her name was Suzan.
 “Suzan!” her mum screamed, “Suzan!”
 Suzan was as happy as the Cheshire cat when she heard her mum shouting her name but as the smoke cleared she saw a tape recorder with the video of her mum shouting her name when she was three on the screen and as she looked around everyone was dead…

Suddenly everything went black, Suzan woke up in her own bed It was all a scary nightmare.

Or was it?

4 comments:

Mr. Jeremy said...

Truly heartbreaking so I am glad it was a dream...or was it?

Unknown said...

What a terribly sad story you've told.
Sounds like something from a horror film! I really do hope it was a nightmare!

Anonymous said...

Your story was very interesting and very sad, how is the girl that survived?

Anonymous said...

Suzan is ok now, she just still remembers what happened really clearly... she did see her grandma a few days ago, but she died 3 years ago!!!!!