One day there was a girl name Helen she live with her lovely family and in 1 day will be her birthday and she have one brother his name is Cafe but there two always fight. The only one who can stop them is their mother. In the morning they went to the shopping mall to get her a cake but they start to fight so mom and dad get annoyed and they are so anger so the car get hit by the tree. As the smoke cleared the police come and help.
1 comment:
Nice story line but some of the words are used incorrectly such as " they are so anger". Nice work!
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