Monday, 28 November 2016

Dear Diary

Dear diary,

Today, I felt like my world had collapsed!
What happened? Well...
Firstly, I was walking with Jack(my little brother) to school when a crocodile crossed the road! That made Jack say over and over again:
"I want a crocodile, I want a crocodile!"
When we got to our wide school, I realized that today was Saturday! What a waste of time! Within the time we got home, my best friend, Susan, called me to ask:
"Where are you? Why aren't you at the park?"
I had completely forgotten about the park! I ran there exhausted and said:

"I'm here!" But when I arrived, she wasn't there! As I walked back home, I fell into the mud and got my brand new orange sweater dirty!


2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like how you have written it as a diary.

Anonymous said...

Nice story, love your idea. I like your layout.