One sunny morning, Sunflower was on her daily walk to the
park when she saw a pot.
“That’s strange” she whispered to herself. Sunflower picked
up the pot and took it home, then she continued with her day– watering flowers,
doing homework, Baking cookies- then at 9:09pm she remembered the pot.
Sunflower stomped up the stairs to her room, but that was strange her mum
didn’t shout at her to tell her to be quiet. Sunflower ran into her room saw 4
legs sticking out of the pot but before she could scream the pot had sucked her
in too!
6 comments:
Hi Sade,Wow I really like the post you make for this week,I like how you remembered the quotation marks.Good job Sade keep up the good work.
I like that you set the scene at the end it makes me picture that the pot is very fast and sneaky to suck her in before she could scream. I also like that she is just a normal person and it makes me think that this could happen to anyone.
I like how she is described and when you told us that she stomped upstairs that helped me visualize her even more
Thank you
Thank You, You have got the picture I wanted to create where this could happen to anyone.
Thank you, I hoped you enjoyed the story. I tried to paint the picture in your mind so it could be anyone...
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