Saturday, 5 November 2016

100 word challenge

On a frightful Halloween night and after a good long session of trick or treating, Billy decides to head on home with his mother right beside him. He checks his bag and, as regular trick or treaters would do, he checks the candy for any sort of trick or hazard inside of them and to his surprise, this year he had no hazards in them... he thought. When he was a few meters from the house his bag explodes into a horrible smelling, possibly poisonous ball of smoke and as the smoke cleared he saw a shadowy figure beside him.

2 comments:

Mr. Jeremy said...

You built up the tension well and timed this well for Halloween. Was the shadowy figure Billy's mother?

Anonymous said...

I like the story and the idea. The story started of really nicely, but maybe you should shorten down the sentences a little because it can get confusing.