As the smoke cleared I slowly started to get up. I didn't know where I was. Suddenly there was a man a torch in front of me. He had overgrown grey hair and bright blue eyes. He said his name was Frank and he has been here for 20 years! When he said that I sat on the ground and started to cry because I knew I would die. I looked up there was a white gas flowing in the air and as soon as it got to me I couldn't breathe and I realized i had tasted it before than I knew it was the end for me.
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This is a amazing story! I love it! You forgot a comma behind "Suddenly" and "with" behind "man". If there are no mistakes, this will be the best story ever!
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