4 years later, after the discovery of the mysterious Yellow planet, as they name it. Jack and Bob came back into space to explore the Yellow planet. They went in the Yellow planet and first thing they found was a lonely tree, a golden tree. As they sped pass the tree, Bob notice that the ship was to fast. In a click of a finger, the ship crash on water and the did a somersault, and land on the other side of what seems to be a lake. They got of the ship unarmed and they were groaning. They took a little walk on a scary ground. Then out of nowhere smoke just appear. They heard load footsteps. As the smoke cleared, they saw a horrendous giant beast with big claws, teeth and horns. The beast starts charging at them. They saw a cave so they sprint towards the cave, they hid in the there but the beast is slashing the cave.
Will the find a way out?
4 comments:
A suspenseful ending. I wonder how they get out...
Chai,
I like your phrases like 'click of a finger' and your vivid word choices like 'groaning' and 'slashing'. Thank you for sharing your work.
Mrs. Gagnon (USA)
Thank you, and your welcome.
Thank you, and your welcome.
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