For the Run
It was a dark and misty day. It was great day to for a surprise attack. Our infantry start walking towards the foe in high weeds. We all walk swiftly in the weeds. Then suddenly everybody stopped. They were coming ...as the weather changed, they... started running at us with their weapons. we tried to stand our ground, but they were too strong. So we all run in every direction. I stopped to catch my breath and when I looked up there was the foe pointing a gun in front of me. I then tried to run, but they shot...
3 comments:
Great story but next time don't leave it on a cliffhanger unless there is going to be a second one.
That should make sense after you take off that cliffhanger and should be more interesting.
Wow very interesting after they shot something. Did he shot you?
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