Sunday, 15 January 2017

Maze #1

Hi, I am going to tell you a story about some idiotic teenagers entering an abandoned, haunted, public park. Well, the bravest is named Tommy, that's what she says, and the girl is named Lisa, and the scaredy cat one is called Jonathan. "Come on Jonathan! Are you a scared or what?!" shouted Tommy. Oooh, that is one big load mouth. "N...no, I'm not scared." murmur Jonathan. I feel bad for this guy, anyway they’re entering a maze where over 3000 people died. "I looked in front and behind. Which way did Jonathan go?” whispered Lisa


TO BE CONTINUED...

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Cool story Chai, I like the words you use and you use to be continued yeah that's cool.

Anonymous said...

I like it. You didn't tell us the whole story. So it makes us think that what happened to Jonathan.