The Vietcongs
...I looked in front and behind. Which way... I had no idea where I was going. We were in the middle of the jungle being chased by vietcongs. We had to find ways out of the jungle, because the vietcongs knew this place from the back of their heads. Then we heard gun fire. I try to shoot back, but I couldn't see them. Just when I did one of our men got hit. Blood was oozing out of his stomach. I ran over, but we knew he would die. When I got there we were surrounded by vietcongs. BANG...
1 comment:
I like your title Theo and how you used ellipsis.I also like how the last word in your story was Bang because it really makes you think about what is going to happen next.
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