Under The Sky
Under a dark sky, the wind was blowing as strong as
steel, they could not find the way that would take them back home.
They were standing tearful at the entrance of the cave
staring at the sky hoping the rain would finally stop.
There were scary noises coming from the wood and they
felt the presence of wild animals, they lit a fire to keep them far from the
cave and to keep themselves warm.
Suddenly they heard a loud noise and saw something
moving fast, a rabbit had come to eat the few carrots they had left……
2 comments:
Your idea is really imaginative. But I think if you should stick with one or two ideas for now.
I like your story and you have a good metaphor "blowing as strong as steel".
Powerful adjectives give me a real idea of what your story is about dark sky, standing tearful and scary noises.
You've missed out one keyword as part of the challenge, mauve.
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