Monday, 30 January 2017

Weird soup

When I was 5 years old I was very ill. One day she went to doctor and tell how is my sickness. she came back home and told me with tearful voice she said " You probably be sick for whole life". But my mum can help me. It was a magic soup that my. It was a carrot soup, I wait on the table she neatly cut the carrot by steel knife and roasted it. I found book how to make the soup under the table It was very complicate. I wait until she finish. Such a weird colour it was mauve, I don't want to eat it but i need to. Felt weird but I’m fine now.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great ideas Mark, but you should check your spelling. ;)

Anonymous said...

It's a great story Mark,but i feel like some words are missing.

Alma said...

Sorry Mark but, who is SHE?

Anonymous said...

I really like your story but some of the spelling are wrong.

Anonymous said...

Mark you should have wrote the names of the characters and make sure you don't make mistakes.