Tuesday, 28 February 2017

Framed!

It was a nice night in a high-rise apartment and their was a big party going on in the 24 story building, Alex and his friends Sam and Charlie are one of those people who are invited in the party."This is a big yellow party isn't it Charlie". said Alex happily."Oh yes it is Alex"said Charlie."However it is remarkable to be in such a big party like that". Then suddenly as Alex, Sam and Charlie head for the bartender."bang bang". "What was that"said everyone. And then suddenly a man jump into a crowd and starts to search everyone in his tablet."When is he doing". Whispered Charlie nervously."I don't know Charlie but it doesn't sound good"said Alex as their gingerly in patience. Then suddenly the man showed his gun and Alex, Charlie and Sam now discovered that their in big trouble. Then the police showed up and suddenly found someone red handed with a weapon and they chased after him."I think were safe Alex"said Charlie and Sam."I hope so". said Alex. Soon the Police told all about the person who was red handed and explain them that he was wanted by the police and the party continue.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Harry it was a nice story but way more then a hundred words.

Mr. Jeremy said...

Harry, you have tried hard to include the 5 challenge words in this piece of writing however you have used 196 words - this is the 100 word challenge!