Running with no place to go I run up to a wall...
I close my eyes a beautiful garden filled with white flowers surrounding me theres a wooden door in front of me flashing, a big black wall right in front of me I turned around ...Click click click.
"Why click?"
"I'm here don't worry"said (?)
Now I'm here standing in the darkness looking up at the stars thinking to myself ,should have I done what I have done...?
From the stars...
3 comments:
An interesting tale Jessica - you have tried hard to meet the extra challenge, however this week's challenge is to write about 'laughter'.
I like how you had some speech and how you had some cliffhangers. To make it better you could of made it about laughter and you could have added a few more sentences.
I agree with Sade on the cliffhangers but maybe fully explain what's going on next time. :)
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