Payson and Patrisha were playing around in the forest and they came across something very strange. There were a 3 boats just sitting in the middle of the forest. They looked very old and moldy. "We should go onto the boat" said Payson "sure" replied Patrisha. They walked onto the boat and suddenly out of know where a huge pack of dogs came out and started attacking Patrisha! Payson had no idea what to do she she ran home and never came back! 2 months later she was found by her step brother Oliver dead eaten alive by a pack of wild dogs.
2 comments:
I like your story, it's very intense.
A terrifying story although I'm not sure why someone would abandon a friend like that. Maybe you could try to just write the beginning of a story so we are left to wonder what might happen next rather than trying to fit so much into only 100 words.
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