...To be continued...
Friday, 31 March 2017
RRUUNN!!
Worried, Beautiful Brown Betty ran as fast and as rapidly as she possibly could looking, seeking, searching for a safe place to hide. It was coming. The strange, whale-like, demon, camera thing everyone dreaded... Why me!? she thought. Suddenly, she heard a GIGANTIC, deafening, croaky, husky, hard growl directly behind her. Panicking like a very busy bee, she ran where she thought she would be safest. Until...
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Hello Faye,
I’m Harper and I go to The Phoenix School in Salem Massachusetts! I am in 7th grade and 13 years old!
This was a very well written piece of writing! I liked that you made a cliffhanger for an ending because that makes me want to read even more because it leaves more to be desired at the end!
I do not usually do cliffhangers because then I feel obligated to do a second part and I usually don't want to stick to the same idea for all of my stories.
I have in the past made some cliffhangers, but sadly I never got to follow up with another story…
Do you plan on making a follow up for this story?
What gave you the idea to create a scary persona for this 100WC?
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Sincerely,
Harper!
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