Worried, Bob would slip of the beautiful,hard, brown mountain because of all the wet snow on the floor.
Bob slipped off.
He was falling with my camera at an incredibly fast pace but before he reached the bottom of the mountain he...Was standing at the top of the mountain without a scratch!
But how was Bob at the top when a few seconds ago he was falling to his death?
Slowly he waved at me and yelled "I just jumped on that trampoline down there!" That was as shocking as a pig dancing but the strange thing is that that same trampoline has a huge hole in it now!
Tuesday, 28 March 2017
The Cliff
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3 comments:
Very good story the ellipsis was used well.
Hi Isabel,
I think this was a really creative story because you have a lot of things that might not happen too often, but they are really fun to read about like going on a trampoline to the very top of a mountain after sliding off it.
I have never made a story like this and I think that it is a really good idea because it allows you to have lots of parts mixed in to 100 words where if you talked about a specific thing, you wouldn’t be able to have that many things to talk about.
I found out that the average adult trampoline weight limit is 450 pounds. I think that with who you are talking about having momentum when he hit the trampoline would definitely be enough to break the trampoline.
Where did you get the idea for this 100wc?
How did Bob survive falling all the way off the mountain?
Brynner
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Thanks I didn't know the weight of an average trampoline was 450 pounds.
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