Dear diary,
Yesterday I went to the park with my friends and there were some rumours about this giant person that saved the day. I wondered who he was, how big he was and where he came from? Both my friends and I were really curious so we asked one of the ladies that was walking a dog and surprisingly he was there. My friends and I quickly rushed to see the hero. We were both surprised to see how someone could be so tiny. He was so tiny that I thought he was a 6 year old boy. However after I had a talk with one of the people in the park the giant person actually meant giant heart.
3 comments:
Sophie,
I like your use of the word curious because it is perfect for the situation. I would be curious if I were in the characters' shoes, too. I am a bit confused toward the middle and end because I can not sort out who is small and who is giant. I am wondering what would make a character mean with a giant heart?
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Keep writing!
Mrs. G., USA
In English giant heat actually mean big heart.
Sophie,
Thank you so much for clearing that up for me. Of course that makes PERFECT SENSE to me now. How very clever of you to play with the words GIANT and TINY like that! I am eager to read more of your writing.
Again, thank you.
Mrs. G., GES, USA
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