The little kid, sleeping on his bed, thought about the story his dad told him. The dad read a story about the a crocodile
within a fictional sea of pirates, so the kid imagined himself as a pirate named Captain Jack Squirrel, which instead of a parrot he had a squirrel. And for the
crocodile he imagined it as a giant
orange crocodile which every once in a while attacked the ship, one day when the giant orange crocodile attacked and bit the ship. It's
wide jaws, filled with razor sharped teeth, was taking away it's mouth from the ship. The ship
collapsed.
2 comments:
you have an interesting way of telling your story
Hi Kit,
Well done on your story this week. You've done a great job with the prompt words. You have been creative and imaginative with your story and you have used some great vocabulary.
Great writing, well done.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin
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