Tuesday, 16 May 2017

Bedtime stories

The little kid, sleeping on his bed, thought about the story his dad told him. The dad read a story about the a crocodile within a fictional sea of pirates, so the kid imagined himself as a pirate named Captain Jack Squirrel, which instead of a parrot he had a squirrel. And for the crocodile he imagined it as a giant orange crocodile which every once in a while attacked the ship, one day when the giant orange crocodile attacked and bit the ship. It's wide jaws, filled with razor sharped teeth, was taking away it's mouth from the ship. The ship collapsed.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

you have an interesting way of telling your story

StMolaga5 said...

Hi Kit,
Well done on your story this week. You've done a great job with the prompt words. You have been creative and imaginative with your story and you have used some great vocabulary.
Great writing, well done.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin