Tuesday, 16 May 2017

'crocodile'

It has been two weeks since I have been abandoned on this island. Within that time i have starved as there wasn't any food except bugs, I couldn't possibly eat that.But the strange thing about this island is that whenever you look behind a orange-goldish coin appears, but whenever I try picking it up but then it would  disappear.One day I was taking a rinse in the salty sea, I rubbed all of the dirt of me and washed my cut on my leg I went deeper into the water.Finally I finished, 'Before I took my first step a wide jaw took a bite out of my leg I turned around to see a crocodile.I collapsed as the amount of blood the were  loss.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

charlee your story is very interesting, but you need to include all the word in it and don't forget to check your word :)