Bob found him self alone in a metal shaped box. He didnt know where he was. Bob stood up peered around the room and all he saw were pipes above him and a dead rotting dog named Chip as it said on his collar. It smellt like a rotton egg. Out of no where a bird started flying around the box bob was so confused about how the bird got in the steel box so he started to talk to it. The bird obviously didnt speak English so Bob started to cry. The bird disapperared and Bob was all alone again. Suddenly the pipes broke and the slime dripped through...
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Ooh, now that's a setting I wouldn't want to find myself in Isabel; poor Bob! I like the way you've provided a sense of what's happening, yet maintaining the mystery of what came before so that my imagination can get to work. I wonder how old Bob is ... and where and how did the bird disappear?
Perhaps there might be another installment?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
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