The wide orange crocodile collapsed purposely on the man. Filled with fear, I sprinted swiftly towards the trapped man, his leg pointing upwards like a mountain. He was crying with pain and fear, but he didn't know yet that within the mouth of the crocodile was his own hands. The crocodile crushed the man's hand, he now was screaming in extraordinary torment. The handless arm wobbling fiercely as blood squirting in every direction. Now everybody around hurried from the graphic and depressing scene. The crocodile pick up the horrified man with it's boldly teeth. Crunch! I had to look away.
3 comments:
Wow! So descriptive and very scary. I LOVED it. Well done!
It is a very gruesome story and also very detailed. I really liked this story, keep up the good work.
Sincerely, Lieve
Very descriptive story I liked it.
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