"Ahoy, Captain!" casually shouted the lookout.
"G'day!" replied randomly the Captain.
26th of November 1883 was that unforgettable day when Captain Lionel got dumped by Lindsay, his girlfriend. So, to be less sad, the captain stupidly decided to be drunk. It was not a good idea, TRUST ME.
"Uhh...someone go and fill up the water tanks with...water..." Drunkly said Lionel.
And so, someone went to do it, but, they did it wrong, as the captain furiously pointed out.
The water just kept gushing out of the tanks that they had to put cloths all over them.
3 comments:
Your story was a bit confusing this week. I think you where trying too hard to fit every thing in. It is a bit muddled and some of the text is back to front.
I like how you used dialogues in your writing.I really like your story especially your ideas this week.
I really liked your dialog because it was as if it was a real conversation between pirates.
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