Friday, 2 June 2017

Home alone


It was dark at night. I was home alone, my parents went on a holiday in Hawaii for three days. I was scared i heard nouses downstair so I went to get a pen so maybe I can protect myself with it. 10 minuets later the rain started lighting began. I had to go downstair to get my laundry down. While I was walking downstairs I looked outside. In the flash of lightning I saw a shadow of a person standing there. So I quickly went downstair and get a kitchen. As I ran upstairs with fear I heard a door knocking  sound. So I fastly ran up to my room and hide under the bed.                                              

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Natty your story is very scary and mysterious but don't forget to correct your spelling and I in a capital letter:)

Anonymous said...

Great story, that made me feel scared, but one of you I are not capital I and "fastly" is not a word. You should used the word "quickly" instead of fastly.

Anonymous said...

i really like your your story natty