One happily morning Rebbeca was walking around picking up flowers near by her house. Her bestfriend house was 2 blocks away. So Rebbeca walk to her Carly her bestfriend and ask her to go out for a walk together. Rebbeca and Carly walk and talk. Till suddenly Carly just found out that they were lost so. Carly and Rebbeca walked back but they still got lost. They stop and stare Rebbeca said this might be our last goodbye. Carly and Rebbeca hug. They both lay down but then suddenly the snake bit both of them. Rebbeca and Carly parents found out that she is gone so they told the police. The police ask where were they going? But still now no answer from anyone.
1 comment:
WOW! What a shift in mood in this piece. The beginning was so light and carefree and the ending was dark and despairing. Your word choices helped make the mood obvious. Keep writing.
Mrs. G. USA
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