We were in the car driving and we saw many officers. My brother and I realized that we were going to the parade! I went running to the crowd. Kennedy was the best president, he was the only one without grey hair and my brother thought that Jackie was hot. I was right in front of the coward with my brother. Then we heard a loud bang! I was in complete shock, I turned and my brother was running with a mysterious man with something in his hands... but where were they going? I never saw him after that day...
2 comments:
I think you have just solved one of the great mysteries of the world. However you have left me with more questions...why did your brother run? Was he chasing the shooter? Where did he disappear to?
Great writing to keep the reader wanting to know more Theo.
I found it interesting that you have played with time and perspective for this piece.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G
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