There was a girl named Melanie.Although she was living alone she had her pet dog Felix. Her mom and her sister went missing when she was ten.She ran into the woods to find them couldn't find the way back. 6 years have passed… On one foggy night she saw something outside her window ,as the smoke cleared… she was shocked to see that…It was… her mom she ran outside and gave her a hug.after a few days her mom got better from her sickness. But there was another family member to find and that was her sister.
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I wonder what mum had been doing for the past six years?
When I read your title it made me think what is the story about because your title is powerful it convinces the readers to reed your text but try to right more stores other then that your doing great so far Keep up the good work Jessica!!
I like your title it sounds like the title from a real book so that made me want to read this. I love the story. Felix must have been good at keeping her company for 6 years.
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