Swoosh the wind blew carrying a small old picture. It crashed onto somebody's door and dropped to the ground. A man named David opened the door looking around wondering what made that noise. He looked down and noticed that the picture was actually his and he lost it years ago. It reminded him that him and his grandfather used to hangout at that exact location where the boats were in the picture. David checked the other side of the image and there was a message that told him to visit the place again and theres a gift waiting for him...
2 comments:
I like your ciffhanger and that you've used lots of adjectives. I can picture this story in my head.
HI Izabella. I really enjoyed this story. I love how you left us all wondering what this gift is going to be. I think you did a great job of telling a wonderful story from the picture prompt. Well done.
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