There was a girl called Parker, she was only 13 years old. Her dad had loved sailing, they would always sail (as she lives in a boat) she had an collection of boats. But lets just say when she was a baby her mum had died, she had died from giving birth to Parker, her mum was also diagnosed with cancer but.. that was the past so... lets get to the story! Parker had always dreamed of winning a sailing competition but her dad didn't really wanted her to sail as he says "your just a girl" which really annoys me. But one day while her dad was sailing up the seas......
The end
1 comment:
I really like your cliff hanger, it makes the reader want to continue the story.
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