Lysergic Acid Diethylamide
Everyday was exactly the same, nothing changed. Something had to happen in life. I was coming back from work. I decided to go to a bar. I started talking to a guy. He said, he could bring me ever lasting happiness. I was thrilled. We went under a steel roof. The guy gave me what looked like post office stamps. The guy said, " put it in your lips." and I did. Everything changed. tearful feelings were gone, it became rainbows. Life was moving up, down, fast and slow. Everybody was crying rainbow and vomiting carrots and mauve cats. It's heaven...
5 comments:
I love your really creative and weird ideas of people crying rainbows and vomiting carrots! Maybe next time though, try to use more complex grammar and watch out for your commas! :)
I really like how you incorporated mauve cats and rainbows, it really made me laugh. But at one point you used the wrong grammar.
Very imaginative for a story about a drug that makes you see things.
It was a interesting story :)
I really like what you wrote and it made me laugh because you added vomiting and the sound a little bit weird but yeah.
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