Oh no, here she comes again!!! Every Friday exactly at midnight the same thing happens to me. A thing I’m not sure what it is, steals my carrots!!! I’m so furious I decided to just go out and see what it was. I was in shock when I saw something under the ground, I’m pretty sure I fainted. When I woke up I was so tearful, probably because I had hurt myself hard when I fainted. Until I realized that there was a humongous mauve rabbit with a steel collar hovering above me then I screamed and so did she...
2 comments:
Love how you highlighted the words of the week and I loovvee how you're adding that dramatic aspect to the story... And it's exactly 100 words!! wow!! Next time, watch out for your tenses and maybe use some more complex sentances... :)
I love this story its very well organized.
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