Monday, 29 May 2017
In the TV
In the short holidays I went to Blue port.I looked at the Blue bowl and I wanted to ate the bowl. But the blue bowl is not the food this is the sculpture.Sunday I saw the small Hamburger and I feel hungry but I ate is sculpture.I not like sculpture because sculpture same the food or the dog but is good some people like.
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Very nice work. I know your not fluent in English so very nice try maybe work on not switching from past to present tense :).
The title has nothing to do with the story.
Also be careful of your tense like "I want to ate the bowl". Make sure your sentences actually make sense.
I know English is not your first language but anyway
KEEP TRYING.
i like the story but how does the title have anything to do with your writing. Also be careful with your tenses. you also miss out some words.
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