My friends challenge me to eat something super sour but I just couldn’t eat something so sour, i don't know why because always get stomachache. One day I visited doctor to check that is there anything wrong with me. Doctor said that there was nothing wrong and don't know why I couldn't eat sour stuff. After that day a lot of famous doctor come to see and called this disease as I just couldn't eat something so sour.
Friday, 12 May 2017
It too sour for me
My friends challenge me to eat something super sour but I just couldn’t eat something so sour, i don't know why because always get stomachache. One day I visited doctor to check that is there anything wrong with me. Doctor said that there was nothing wrong and don't know why I couldn't eat sour stuff. After that day a lot of famous doctor come to see and called this disease as I just couldn't eat something so sour.
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3 comments:
Could you make the disease name more imaginative and less dull.
It's has a good story line, but you should check your grammar.
Good job Poom. The only problem is that you just had 76 words instead of 100 remember this is a 100 word challenge not 76 word challenge.
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