After the nightmare, he manage to have a nice sleep, well not exactly. When Bill went up to the deck, Jack asked Bill "What happened last night? I heard you screamed like a baby," but before Bill could answer, the ship hit something. When Joan ran to check, she
collapsed on the floor. Then Bill and Jack ran after to check it out, the terrified, they where pale like they have seen a ghost, the froze like they where in an ice-cube. It was a dead
crocodile floating with its stomach
wide open.
Within its stomach, there was an
orange teeth.
2 comments:
Really good story, I also like that you underlined the words that needed to be in the 100 WC.
Good work Chai, but something you forget about past tense.
Post a Comment