Monday, 22 May 2017

Journey of Bill #2

After the nightmare, he manage to have a nice sleep, well not exactly. When Bill went up to the deck,  Jack asked Bill "What happened last night? I heard you screamed like a baby," but before Bill could answer, the ship hit something. When Joan ran to check, she collapsed on the floor. Then Bill and Jack ran after to check it out, the terrified, they where pale like they have seen a ghost, the froze like they where in an ice-cube. It was a dead crocodile floating with its stomach wide open. Within its stomach, there was an orange teeth.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Really good story, I also like that you underlined the words that needed to be in the 100 WC.

Anonymous said...

Good work Chai, but something you forget about past tense.