Tuesday, 9 May 2017

matee 2

Let me introduce my self I'm Jorden but other pirates would of called me Jordy locks as they would of love taking the Micky out of me,They'd call me that since of the way I look they'd say I would look more of a feminine body as they would say 'you have no muscles'.The first day i joined the ship was awesome but there was only one thing I hate...And It was the food.they cooked horrible the fact that they don't even cook the meat, I just couldn't eat something so disgusting and raw,Even if you looked at it it'd made you puke.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Charlee your story is very nice and interesting :)

Anonymous said...

Good story Charlee, but the "I" need to be capital I.

Anonymous said...

This story is good but Jorden is not a name it's Jordan.

Alma said...

I liked your sentences but dont forget to put a space between your commas and words after, its important! Your story was pretty funny and fun to read.