Monday, 8 May 2017

Nick

Anyone who sails far away in the ocean at night they would hear a little boy crying in the sea. Nobody knows what happened. The story began when a little boy who got forced to be a powder monkey, his name was Nick. He would get bullied. He doesn't have anyone to talk to. The pirates got another boy, his name was Bob. Bob was a very happy boy. He tried to talk to Nick but every time Bob tried to talk Nick always walks away. One night Bob was talking about how good life was but suddenly Nick shouted "Can you stop being so positive about life, you won't know what i have to go through, when I first came here I just couldn’t eat something so how is that good, I've got bullied all the time. So would you please be quiet and go away!" After that day the pirates were getting bored of how unhappy Nick was so he got kicked of the boat. He died in the bottom of the sea...

3 comments:

Natty said...


Hey Irin I like your story but its over 100 word.But still its really interesting to read your story.

Anonymous said...

Don't forget the capital "I". And don't forget its 100WC.

Alma said...

I like how you foresaw the future.