Wide open doors waiting for me. Big gold crocodile statues on each side of my eye, my whole body collapsed once I got to the stand, I knew there I was going to faint but I kept it in. I walked through pearl Orange water which seemed a little off. Once again there I stood with a red water It was calling me like I had no choice but to go, within the water what I saw that day disturbed me and scared me. I should've turned away but I didn't now I'm stuck with this picture in my head .
3 comments:
I really liked your description and the tension. But why did you feel like you were going to faint? In your further posts try to check spelling mistakes. :)
I've looked and looked but although I can find a missing full-stop and a capital letter in the wrong place, this is a wonderfully descriptive post Jessica. Well done!
I liked the way that you have written this story. PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING LIKE THIS. ( Jess bobessica )
Sincerely, Lieve
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