Sunday, 21 May 2017
Within The Dark Island
Within the dark Island they had just arrived to, laid some buried treasure. The captain, looking at the map, took a deep breath. In front of them stood an orange crocodile that was ready for his next meal. Some of the pirates collapsed of terror, but the others ran for their lives. The crocodile, thinking about the other pirates, ate his lunch peacefully. The captain and his crew found it hard to find the treasure, yet at the end they found it. On their wide ship they were all relieved and on their way home, with the marvelous treasure.
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2 comments:
Really love your writing. This story reminded me of the lost boys.
At the start they had just arrived to,(no ,?) laid (lay?) some buried treasure. And at the end they find buried treasure and not bury it themselves . Good story Jessica's correct it reminds me of the lost boys.
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