Tuesday, 9 May 2017
The Inside
It felt like we were getting deeper and deeper into the cave, it was an never ending loop hole. As I walked further in the cave it seemed weirdly quiet. Suddenly I tripped over what felt like a box and I immediately got out tried to see what it was. To my surprise, it was a chest. I tried to figure out what how to budge the thing open but then I gave up. After what seemed like a long time, I saw the chest doing an unlocking motion and just opened itself. I saw inside what seemed like an object that looked really appetizing, but I didn't trust myself. I just couldn't eat something so... old and some that no one had ever found in years.
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3 comments:
I like your story.
Lovely story, but 100 words
I like your use of vocabulary but you should have highlighted the phrase given.
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