Wednesday, 10 May 2017
The Sun
The sun was blazing across the desert, as my sweat became a river that went across my whole body, then evaporated instantly. I tried moving my boney and wet legs, but my energy wasn't enuff. I was going to die, right here. So I softly closed my eyes. Unexpectedly I opened my eyes only to see I was in a bed. A few days passed, the people treated me and gave me saline. Then they asked me you can start eating now, but then I said no, because I just couldn't something so I asked them to keep me on the saline.
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3 comments:
I really like your story as it has nice vocabulary but you have written the prompt wrong.
I like your story and how you have described everything, but you spelt enough wrong (you spelt it enuff). Also, on your prompt you forgot the word eat. (I just couldn't eat something so).
I like your story, but next time you should proof read you posts. By the way " Nice GIF" Mike
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