Dear Mr Andrew,
My name is Charlee i'm 11 years old and.It is very grateful to see someone help other women to deliver their baby.I have a few questions to ask
Whats it like to deliver a baby?
I bet its scary and very exhausting.
Is it scary to deliver a baby?
It would be very frightening to me.
Has anyone died while giving birth?
Why would you choose this Job?
Yours sincerely charlee.
2 comments:
I really liked your letter. It was interesting to see you asked a variety of questions to get Andrew's opinions, and then offered your own feelings on how you would react in these situations. You also included a good introduction to the letter, and ended in a formal manner. The piece had good vocabulary and a clear structure.
To improve, I would suggest you proof read to make sure you've included all of your punctuation.
Well done!
Thanks for your work Charlee. I really enjoyed reading it! I love the range of your questions! For the future I would suggest to proof-read for punctuation, grammar and use of capital letters.
Well done!
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