Tuesday, 13 June 2017
Learning Info about Andrew
I was really Impressed about Andrew's work of his story and it could be a hard work for him when he was writing about it. If I was doing that, I would be experiencing a difficulty of making this story and I will have to learn more to write a story that could be good enough.
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Thanks for your piece Harry. As this isn't a complete letter I won't comment on the content of your story. In terms of advice, I would suggest re-reading your work to spot things such as punctuation and grammar. For example the use of capital letters mid sentence. Look forward to reading your later work!
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