Wednesday, 7 June 2017
The Emergency Room
We were in the emergency room, when a man came bursting into the room. He was gushing with blood in every direction. He was shot in the kidney, then he was being drowned. Half of the surgeons at the hospital work on the kidney and the side of his body, as the others worked on getting the water out of his lungs without interfering the side of his body and kidney. As we were trying the water kept gushing out. After five minutes we had lost him. We even tried to automated external defibrillator, but it didn't work. He was dead
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3 comments:
Very intense but very interesting.
Um Theo, Your suppose to tell the characters name so that most of us could understand perfectly.
Interesting story.I like how you used hard vocabulary in your piece.
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