Wednesday, 7 June 2017
Water Supply Tank
On a rainy day their was a thunder storm. Lighting was striking everywhere from one place to another. Then suddenly the lighting strack the town water supply tank and the water kept washing out. Everyone tried to stop it however the hole was just too big and the water just kept gushing out and quickly flooded the entire town. Home were being washed away one by one and all lives were taken away.
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2 comments:
Sophie,you wrote 73 words instead of 100 words!!
Interesting ideas !!
I like your story Sophie but you wrote home were being washed away instead of homes were being washed away, also, to improve you could add more words to make it closer to 100 words.
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