Friday, 2 June 2017

Water

I kept running and running, so tempted to look back but I couldn't. Thunder and lightning sounds linger in my ear. As I looked down my fingers start to prune more and more as each drop of water fell on my hand. "Theo!" someone shouted. I stopped and slowly turn my head over my right shoulder, my brown hair soaked in water, clothes drenched. I saw a bright light come down a few feet away. I knew it was a sign, in the flash of lightning I saw something that I couldn't explain, something I have never thought was real.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

keep going your doing great and the description on the writing is great
:)

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

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